the chart below shows how frequently people eat fast food in USA betwen 2003 to 2013
The above bar graph illustrates the frequency of eating at fast
food
restaurants among people
residing in the USA between 2003-2013 where the percentage of people
is represented in a horizontal line and their consumption in a vertical line.
Overall
, we can see most people
consume fast foods once a week
whereas
there were only a few people
who had never consumed it or who consume it every day.
From the bar ,graph we can see most of the people
consumed fast food
in 2003 than in 2006 and 2013. Less than 20% of people
consumed fast food
several times a week
and the highest number of people
who consumed fast food
was in 2006. As we can see 30% of the people
fast food
once a week
which was the highest among all and among ,them people
from 2006 consumed the most.
After ,that we can see the number of the population consumed fast food
once or twice a month was almost equal to the people
consuming it once a week
. Approximately 15% of people
consumed it a few times a year. Finally
, less than 5% of the people
had never eaten fast food
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