Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive ? To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people believe that most
of
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the
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countries provide medical
service
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to all without any cost.
However
, new treatment procedures are not
cover
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under
this
service
due to
huge
cost
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. I totally agree
to
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this
statement and
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will discuss
about
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the reasons and
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of
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agreement. To commence with
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notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour of granting
minimal
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standard of
health
care. Everyone
have
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fundamental
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right to achieve basic requirements so nations should cover common utilities .
Furthermore
, individuals need more than
this
coverage
they have enough measures available in
market
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both public and private
ownerships
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assurance
such
as
health
insurance and
life
insurance
polices
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policies
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.
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, if somebody has
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by car accident,emergency services should be provided free of cost . The first aid help to save his
life
but
next
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expenses are carried by themself because they don't have sufficient fund to pay. Moving towards
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another significant reason that free
health
assistance provided
in
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pre-
service
basis,
this
is necessary to protect the
health
of all citizens ,
actally
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actually
is the responsibility of the authorities of a nation
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is
benefitable
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benefit able
while
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any emergency situations
are arises
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like corona
pandamic
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pandemic
situations .
Moreover
,
health
play
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promenent
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prominent
role in our
life
so people feel they are secured under
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mininal
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minimal
coverage
scheme
this
grant satisfaction
not
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only
in
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basic
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the basic
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level
and
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but
also
security
level
.
For example
, during Covid 19
pandamic
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pandemic
situation every country face
this
emergency situation and during that period
this
health
coverage
scheme is very helpful to save the
life
of many people and maintain
the
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harmony .
To sum up
, I totally agree
to
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this
statement of free
health
service
in
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minimal
coverage
basis
in
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primary
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level
because
next
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level
treatements
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treatments
have huge expenses that meet
by
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ourself
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ourselves
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.
Otherwise
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it badly
affect
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financial situation and chance to
loss
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the economic stability of the nation.
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