Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Public transportation plays a vital role in modern society. Its convenience and reliability are two major concerns when a government decides which mode to allocate money
for
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. Personally, I believe both
railways
and
roads
are essential with different functions, and I
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therefore
disagree with the statement that funds should be spent on
railways
instead
of
roads
by governments. On the one hand, there are several reasons for investing
railways
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.
Firstly
,
trains
can transport as
much
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as hundreds of tons of goods at one time, so it's the major way
delivering
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to deliver
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industrial cargoes like coal, mine or steel.
On
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the process of a country's developing industry, railroad facilities and
trains
always take great responsibility. And in another way,
this
also
cost
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less than
roads
or air transport.
Secondly
, railroads can extend several
sousands
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thousand
kilometers away, even from Beijing, China to Hamburg, Germany. and
trains
can run without facing interruption or traffic
jam
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, which makes them faster than cars. With
larger
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proportion of
trains
using electric energy,
railways
can produce less air pollution or greenhouse gases.
On the other hand
, the
benifits
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benefits
of
roads
are
irreplacable
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irreplaceable
as well.
To begin
with,
roads
are
easily
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to build. even when the ground is flat and long without asphalt, that can be named "road" and cars can run on it.
Furthermore
,
roads
can be constructed in various
environment
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environments
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, from
plain
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plains
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to
highland
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highlands
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or
mountain
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mountains
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. When catastrophic disasters like heavy earthquakes occur, supplies are
nomally
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normally
shipped in
this
way.
Additionally
, private cars and buses are
also
the main
mode
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of transportation for short-distance travel. It is hard to imagine how people can go shopping in supermarkets or visit friends from their own
home
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homes
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without
roads
. In conclusion, it is possible for governments to construct
railways
and
roads
with
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different
order
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orders
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or
amount
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, but those two are both necessary for public transportation.
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  • Sustainable
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