Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

information

plays a major role in many aspects of society. Concerning the need

of

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scientific research, business and academic terms, some individuals hold the belief that

information

should be shared limitless.

However

, in my opinion, some

information

need

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needs

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to be spread after consideration, given its importance and value. On the one hand, advocates of

freelimiting

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free limiting

free-limiting

hold their view for some reasons.

Firstly

, competition and starting

business

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businesses

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are encouraged in

commerce

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the commerce

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field,

due to

the spread of

information

.

For example

, a few months after Tesla (the vehicle company) opened its patents in 2014, several electric vehicle companies were founded, where many other different cars with lower prices and new technologies were manufactured. People could

benifit

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benefit

from it and

moreover

, clean-energy technologies

boosted

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thanks to that.

Secondly

, sharing

information

can advance scientific research, avoiding duplication of effort. What if Newton and Leibniz had worked on

cauculus

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calculus

together,

instead

of

seperately

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separately

, mathematics could be on another level in the 17th century

.

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The

others

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point of view, which is

also

my favourite, some

information

need

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needs

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to be kept considering its value. To start with, some key technologies were produced out of the need

of

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national defence, which surely cannot be spread freely. Supposing the drawings of nuclear weapons

being

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are

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known by fascist countries, that could be a huge disaster

to

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the world.

Next,

some companies need to be

competitve

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competitive

for

its

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their

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secrets.

The

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apply

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Apple, the richest company in the world, is famous for its closed sources. Even facing great controversy, Apple's products ensure great

users'

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users

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experience

due to

that. In conclusion, though spreading

information

is

benificial

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beneficial

to

out

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our

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society, we cannot do it without limitation, especially in the area of military, commerce and science.