Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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that animal experiment is not
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and supposed to be banned,
while
others stand on that notion
according to
the benefits that might bring.
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essay will elaborate more on both perspectives in the following paragraph. Regarding experiment matters, using
animal
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animals
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in a laboratory can be acceptable in order to support the
scientist
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their job.
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the end will be beneficial for human beings rather than using humans directly.
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use rats in the laboratory to prove the function of medicine and how the drugs work to heal some
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.
As a result
, when experiments succeed,
it
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can be applied to
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we can consume that medicine without worrying about the
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.
On the other hand
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the cutting edge of the era,
instead
of using animals they could use a robot to support the mission.
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approach is better applied to the military services which
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mostly
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dog
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to be more skilled and
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them to deal with some reason. Even though they sometimes faced difficulties even dying because could not associate with the environment.
Thus
, it will be more practical if they use robots to deal with their problem.
To conclude
, the way scientists treat animals still can be tolerated as long as they
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them
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properly for a meaningful reason.
Moreover
, it will be far
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when technology can take part and minimise the usage of animals in
this
industry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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