the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

From the chart above, we can see the pattern of opening

stores

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2011 until 2018 is more stable than the

number

of closed

stores

in the same range of time. A significant decrease

of

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opened

stores

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happened

happen

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2011 and 2012. After that, it started to rise until reached 6000

stores

in 2014.

However

,

since

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2014 onwards the

number

were

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slowly reduced and become flattened until 2017. In 2018 it reached the lowest

number

at only 3000

store

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opened.

While

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numbers

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of closed

stores

are seen starting from 2011 until 2014. A

drastical

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drop is seen in the next year, only 500

stores

were closed in 2015 and it was the lowest

number

during the time range.

However

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the year after, it started to increase and reached more than 5000

stores

then

stable until 2018.

To sum up

, the

number

of new and bankrupt

stores

in the country were having the same pattern, many

stores

were opened but many of them

also

closed, except in 2015.