Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern

time

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, choosing the place to live plays a vital role in the

life

of everybody , especially young people. Somebody believed that metropolis

are

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the

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suitable place to live

whereas

another

disagree

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with

this

statement. It is the opinion of

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writer that the latter choice is the best option. There can be no doubt that living in the cities, we will have more convenient

center

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serve for entertainment ,health and education. Not only that, it

also

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the place where humans can find

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well-paied

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well-paid

job easily without high

demanding

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. In spite of

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advantages, it

also

have

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more reverses as higher levels of crime and criminally expensive living costs.

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, living in the urban,dweller need to show their

responsibilites

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responsibilities

responsibility

for their fortune if not they will not have an opportunity to find it again. Another point worth

consideration

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is that

be

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settled in

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rural area

also

have two

two

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main benefits. For a start, the pace of

life

is slower. When living in the

countrysides

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countryside

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, the living costs

lower

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than

the

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in the

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cities so dwellers do not mind about their

life

as the city's residents. The

last

one is the ease of traffic in the rush hour. In the rush hour of cities, the congestion is more and more serious

while

in the countryside it is not so.From my point of view , I am really keen on

life

in the countryside, cultivating a sense of community is really great, they often help others when we have difficulties in

life

.

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, I

also

the peaceful atmosphere and spectacular natural landscapes

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here. Taking everything into account, people always may vary in their opinion, but I believe that rural areas provide a better-quality

life

,

a

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lower living costs , leisurely in traffic and the atmosphere. It doesn't matter whether you live in the countryside or in the city, but make the decision that feels suitable for you