Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are of the opinion that the greatest place where people should live is in the urban or suburban
also
have some apparent
assests
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assets
.
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my view,
cities
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stimulated
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me a
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and the opportunities which it provides too attractive careers to choose. It is vital to understand that
cities
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an
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adequate social welfare compared to
country
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the country
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. The process of
urbanzation
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urbanisation
leads to
attractive
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a lot of citizens have lived there because of the basic necessities
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to every resident. Another point worth
consideration
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is
that
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the
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acceptable medical treatments. Both children and
adult
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adults
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also
have
an early protective measures
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early protective measures
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.
Hence
,
the
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disease
preventation
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prevention
leads to almost the public are felt fit as a fiddle.
Moreover
, in modern society,
persons
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can gain more opportunities than in
suburban
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. They can easily to full fill their desires and make an attempt to try to achieve their dreams. It has had a large scale of prestigious educational institutions and students who study
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there could be broadened their horizons.
On the other hand
, more space is the best exemplary area in
country
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. A pertinent example of
this
is that houses in rural areas typically have more square footage acreage. The street
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emptier and stores are
less
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less
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bursting. Just simply having more room to breathe and
life
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is
a
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favourable of living in a
subu
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suburb
. Especially, clear air is the most attractive
features
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in
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country
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.
Country
diving
also
means less cars and traffic on the road which naturally means less population and better air quality. There
are
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a lot of green
enviroment
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environments
which can actually improve the quality of the atmosphere as well city lights are
also
much
non-existen
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non-existent
in the
country
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air
polution
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pollution
. In conclusion, I strongly recommend young people live in
cities
and elderly people live in
country
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. Both
cities
and
country
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countries
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also
are
a
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suitable places to live.
Nonetheless
,
cities
always is an acceptable
place
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places
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for all ages
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