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Some people think cities are the best to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside.Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that living in cities rather than living in the
countryside
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 proposal of employment Nowadays, Living in cities has many advantages
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 as more jobs and employment, high salaries, modern facilities, and high-tech hospital tools.
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, Mosquitoes can be prevented.
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, people who live in the
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 can be suffered from various illnesses that can lead to dead in many circumstances. Meanwhile, living in the
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 has some benefits too. When you live in the
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, you will feel peaceful and refresh your mood. Living in the
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 can keep away from the hustle and bustle lifestyle.
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, you can expose to air pollution, and visual pollution when living in cities because of the usual congestion. The fumes from transportation can lead to several illnesses concerning to lungs.
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, if you are good enough, the best option is still to develop life in the
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 and keep away from pollution.
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