Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most
of
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people
decided to live in cities
because of its
convenience, but there are some opinions Correct pronoun usage
their
say
that suburb is a perfect Correct pronoun usage
that say
place
to live. From my perspective, both places have their own positive aspects, no matter where you live in
, as long as you Change preposition
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happy
and feel comfortable. Honestly, I prefer the comfort of living in a big Add a missing verb
are happy
city
than
a rural area and I will give the pros and cons Change preposition
to
in
each Change preposition
of
places
throughout Change to a singular noun
place
this
essay and try to draw conclusion
.
Add an article
a conclusion
Initially
, there is an enormous number of modern services are
located in the Unnecessary verb
apply
city
which gives easy access to everybody to support their daily life. For instance
, stores like supermarket
, banks, clothes Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
shop
and so forth are available everywhere so citizens do not have to go far to get what they need. Fix the agreement mistake
shops
Moreover
, In a big city
, you have many opportunities to approach a higher quality in term
of education, medical and transportation. Fix the agreement mistake
terms
As a result
that
you have a good condition to develop and improve yourself so as to make your life better. Correct pronoun usage
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On the other hand
, living in a big city
still has some problem
that you have to accept Fix the agreement mistake
problems
such
as traffic. It is one of the main disadvantage
when you live in Change to a plural noun
disadvantages
this
place
. Many people
drive by car every day and it entails residents in large cities
have
to deal with rush-hour traffic on the way to work, school and on Wrong verb form
having
way
back. Another point worth considering is that there are more environmental issues in the Correct article usage
the way
cities
than the
countryside because of toxic gases from cars and industries. Change preposition
in the
Consequently
, people
may get lung disease and respiratory problems. All in all, it is not really a big obstacle because government
are acting to find solutions for Fix the agreement mistake
governments
people
who suffer from the
air pollution in Correct article usage
apply
cities
.
Secondly
, more old people
choose to live in rural place
in search of fresh air. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Furthermore
, people
in Add an article
the suburb
suburb
are very friendly and Fix the agreement mistake
suburbs
this
place
filled
with solace and peace so many Add a missing verb
is filled
people
like to live in. However
, it is not convenient enough for people
to have a better standard of living because of outdated facilitie
and Correct your spelling
facilities
service
.
In conclusion, each of Fix the agreement mistake
services
places
has both metrics and drawbacks as well. In my opinion, Correct article usage
the places
high
quality of living in Correct article usage
the high
city
and better equipment in medicine and education make Add an article
the city
a city
cities
a better place
to live without regarding
to Change the form of the verb
regard
the
other problems.Correct article usage
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