Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, most
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people
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decided to live in
cities
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because of
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convenience, but there are some opinions
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that suburb is a perfect
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to live. From my perspective, both places have their own positive aspects, no matter where you live
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, as long as you
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and feel comfortable. Honestly, I prefer the comfort of living in a big
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than
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a rural area and I will give the pros and cons
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each
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throughout
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a conclusion
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.
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, there is an enormous number of modern services
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located in the
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which gives easy access to everybody to support their daily life.
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, stores like
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supermarkets
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, banks, clothes
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and so forth are available everywhere so citizens do not have to go far to get what they need.
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, In a big
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, you have many opportunities to approach a higher quality in
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of education, medical and transportation.
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that
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you have a good condition to develop and improve yourself so as to make your life better.
On the other hand
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, living in a big
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still has some
problem
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that you have to accept
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as traffic. It is one of the main
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when you live in
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place
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. Many
people
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drive by car every day and it entails residents in large
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to deal with rush-hour traffic on the way to work, school and on
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back. Another point worth considering is that there are more environmental issues in the
cities
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than
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in the
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countryside because of toxic gases from cars and industries.
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,
people
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may get lung disease and respiratory problems. All in all, it is not really a big obstacle because
government
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are acting to find solutions for
people
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who suffer from
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air pollution in
cities
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.
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, more old
people
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choose to live in rural
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place
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in search of fresh air.
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,
people
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in
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the suburb
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suburb
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suburbs
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are very friendly and
this
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place
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filled
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is filled
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with solace and peace so many
people
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like to live in.
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, it is not convenient enough for
people
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to have a better standard of living because of outdated
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facilities
and
service
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services
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. In conclusion, each of
places
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has both metrics and drawbacks as well. In my opinion,
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quality of living in
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city
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the city
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and better equipment in medicine and education make
cities
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a better
place
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to live without
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to
the
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other problems.
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