In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the imminent epoch, the future of
driverless
transportation
vehicles
has been a matter of
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public interest. I acknowledge the possibility of
this
predictable scientific leap,
however
,
i
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do not think the advantages of
this
will surpass the disadvantages. We have to admit that there are some advantages when the
vehicles
transform into automatic and
driverless
mode,
for instance
, people will have additional flexibility during
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time in
vehicles
which can save a huge amount of time on the road.
In addition
, it will send the driver to the destination effortlessly so that much energy could be kept to be devoted to work or other activities.
Nevertheless
, the
disvantages
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disadvantages
are remarkably more apparent.
Firstly
,
driverless
vehicles
deprive mankind of the joy
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steering. Motoring
vehicles
is not only just a solution for movement but
also
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immensely well-received hobby among the public which means if those who are deeply
fasinated
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fascinated
with driving cannot drive anymore, it will be a massive depression for them.
Secondly
,
driverless
vehicles
are relying on the most advanced techniques and
algorithm
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which
also
possesses a chance of
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in the programme, it will enhance the potential of accidents
consequently
which
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like the scenario in the movie
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"I, Robot" starred by Will Smith.
Finally
, if the driver is no longer required in the vehicle, it will cause a reduction of certain occupations, namely drivers, which
also
undermines the employment market and turns out to be a negative ramification. In conclusion,
i
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am looking forward to witnessing the evolution of techniques
nonetheless
, but the advantages of
driverless
vehicles
will not outweigh the reverse
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from my perspective.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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