The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
The bar chart provides information about the number of incidents and injuries per 100
million
miles travelled by people using a specific kind of transport in 2002.
Looking from the overall
perspective it is readily apparent that incidence were more common than injuries during the whole year. Moreover
, demand response was the most dangerous group, while
commuter rail
was the safest one.
With regards to the incidents, the segment with the lowest amount was commuter rail
(20 accidents per 100 million
passengers), followed by heavy rail
(51). In addition
, light rail
and bus divided third place and accounted for 76 for both categories. Moreover
, demand response was a leader with 225 cases.
According to
the graph, the lowest number of injuries had individuals, who travelled by commuter rail
(17 million
PMT). Furthermore
, heavy and light rail
had 35 and 36 million
PMT respectively, while
bus transportation had 66 cases. Finally
, most passengers were injured during demand response travelling.Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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