lt is important for реор/е to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do уои think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
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on a person’s life.
On the one hand, taking Use synonyms
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in a tight situation leads to new experiences and opportunities for self-discovery. It is thought that if you want to know about the strong and the weak sides of your personality you should go outside your comfort zone first and take a Use synonyms
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to try something new which helps to know accurately what you need to improve your weaknesses. Use synonyms
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, Abdullah Ahmad who is a famous entrepreneur in Saudi Arabia, left his job at Apple and started his Company in Social Media Software in 2008, and now he is successful and the richest entrepreneur in the Middle East. Linking Words
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, many young people are suffering from stress and depression Linking Words
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, people should know how to plan very well before they take action because there might be negative Linking Words
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risks
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as a plan B.
In conclusion, taking a Linking Words
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. Having said that, the cons out way the pros.Use synonyms
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language
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Ensure that each point you raise is thoroughly supported with concrete examples or evidence.
coherence cohesion
Further enhance your coherence by using connecting phrases to smooth the flow between ideas.
introduction
Your introduction clearly outlines the main argument and sets up your stance effectively.
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You provide relevant examples to support your points, such as the story of Abdullah Ahmad.
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