Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days
technology
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has changed everything in our lives. I completely agree that newspapers will disappear with the development of
technology
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and I disagree that they will remain an important source of
news
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. Today
technology
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makes our lives easier than before,we can search for any information by clicking on the bottom.To illustrate,there are many websites and applications that provide
news
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every day and everyone can reach these websites easily.
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,social media apps
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as Instagram, and Twitter provide what is new every day and people always active and follow these accounts .
However
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,there are a lot of people who prefer to read
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from newspapers but with
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development in all
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it is hard to continue printing newspapers ,so they need to adapt and download applications or visit websites that are
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in providing everyday
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.
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, BBC,Sabq , and Aukaz. In conclusion, I believe that
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made our lives easier and we should get advantage and read the
news
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from online resources.
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