The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the us in 2013. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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chart illustrates the data regarding the meaning of visits to five cities in the UK in the year 2013, Correct your spelling
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Overall
the main reason of
visits to the country was for holidays. Change preposition
for
Edinburgh
had the vast majority of tourists, pursued by London, while
Birmingham remained as
the least visited city for Change preposition
apply
this
purpose
It can be seen from the chart that just under 70 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
visitors
were most common in Edinburgh
being for holiday
seasons. Correct article usage
the holiday
This
proportion is nearly five times as high as the figure for Edinburgh
’s business visitors
which has the lowest number of visitors
and roughly about 50 percent
higher than that of Change the spelling
per cent
visitors
seeing friends or relatives, London is in the same situation as Edinburgh
with the highest percentage for holiday at around 20 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
being
comparatively close to Change the form of the verb
is
Edinburgh
in numbers.
As for the other cities , nearly 50 percent
of Birmingham’s Change the spelling
per cent
visits'
were mainly for business with a dramatic gap between the other purposes, followed by Change noun form
visits
manchester
with half as many employees coming to the city for their work. Capitalize word
Manchester
Meanwhile
Liverpool is shockingly more popular for holidays with slightly over 30% and Add a comma
,Meanwhile
closely
of Change the word
close
this
number are coming for family and friends.Submitted by Shaden.Hamadk on
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