The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given three pie charts represent the ratio of annual expenditure by domestic people who are
incharge
in Someland between 1980 and 2000. Correct your spelling
in charge
Overall
, the spending on the
higher Correct article usage
apply
education
had the highest proportion whereas
the environmental services and other expenses had the lowest ratio in the period of 20 years.
The total expenditure of
higher Change preposition
on
education
, transportation, and environmental services saw noticeable
upward trend over two decadesCorrect article usage
a noticeable
,
and reached Remove the comma
apply
to
40%, 22%,Change preposition
apply
9
% respectively. Spending on higher Correct word choice
and 9
education
's proportion was 35% in 1980, 10 years later almost half of the expenses were on higher education
which was decreased by 5% in 2000. Moreover
, transportation was
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
hit the bottom in 1990, then
inclined by 16% and reached the second significant expenditure area.
On the contrary
, the remaining categories three categories experienced a drop in the percentages of total spending over 20 years. The field of K-12 Education
had a quarter percentages
of expenses in 1980, Correct the article-noun agreement
a quarter percentage
quarter percentages
nevertheless
, this
group noticeable
decreased over time and declined to 18% in 2000.Change the word
noticeably
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