The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.
The table illustrates changes in
income
and spending of a building for lease named Brooklyn Hall in three separate years.
Overall
, it is clear that
its expenditure had increased far more considerably than overall
revenue, so profit had dropped over this
period.
Hire of rooms remained the largest source of income
throughout these years, with fluctuations between 32,000 and 34,000 pounds
. Fundings of council tower and other bodies had decreased by 5,000 and 2,000 pounds
, while
cafe sales, which contribute a significant
smaller Change the adjective
significantly
income
, had doubled from 3,000 to 6,000 pounds
.
Brooklyn Hall recorded a noticeable growth of 6,000 pounds
in total income
, and an enormous increase in it is running costs, reaching 77,000 pounds
in the last
year. Meanwhile, profit saw a corresponding fall from 9,000 pounds
to only 1,000 pounds
by the end of the period in question.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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