The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.

The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.
The table illustrates changes in
income
and spending of a building for lease named Brooklyn Hall in three separate years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
its expenditure had increased far more considerably than
overall
revenue, so profit had dropped over
this
period. Hire of rooms remained the largest source of
income
throughout these years, with fluctuations between 32,000 and 34,000
pounds
. Fundings of council tower and other bodies had decreased by 5,000 and 2,000
pounds
,
while
cafe sales, which contribute a
significant
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smaller
income
, had doubled from 3,000 to 6,000
pounds
. Brooklyn Hall recorded a noticeable growth of 6,000
pounds
in total
income
, and an enormous increase in it is running costs, reaching 77,000
pounds
in the
last
year. Meanwhile, profit saw a corresponding fall from 9,000
pounds
to only 1,000
pounds
by the end of the period in question.
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