Many museums charge for admission while others are free . do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to musuems outweigh the disadvantages?

Charging entry fees to

museums

is justified or not is a topic of debate in many countries. Some

people

have the opinion that entry fees for

museums

should be charged as it helps in the maintenance and upkeep of

museums

.

Also

, it provides dollar revenue to the government as lots of foreign tourist flock to see

museums

.

Whereas

some think that

museums

should be free for visitors as

people

should able to see about their past history and culture. Most

people

argued that if

museums

are open for free it will create various problems like difficulty in managing crowds.

Furthermore

,The chance of theft may increase .

people

will not value the importance of their rich cultural

heritage

if they are allowed to enter

museums

for free.

For instance

, in ,Egypt museum fees are relatively high as the cost of maintenance is

also

high.

However

, admission to

museums

is paid . if will create funds for the upkeep of

museums

. It

also

provides financial assistance to the government . ,

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it will preserve cultural

heritage

in a secure way.

People

will value the importance of their

heritage

.

for example

, In India

museums

are restricted to paid visitors only as it helps in the upkeep of

museums

and protects cultural

heritage

. In ,conclusion the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of keeping

museums

with paid entry.

Museums

are built to showcase the history of the culture of a particular region. It should be preserved and protected . That will only

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be protected by paid entries to

museums

.