Many museums charge for admission while others are free . do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to musuems outweigh the disadvantages?
Charging entry fees to
museums
is justified or not is a topic of debate in many countries. Some people
have the opinion that entry fees for museums
should be charged as it helps in the maintenance and upkeep of museums
. Also
, it provides dollar revenue to the government as lots of foreign tourist flock to see museums
. Whereas
some think that museums
should be free for visitors as people
should able to see about their past history and culture.
Most people
argued that if museums
are open for free it will create various problems like difficulty in managing crowds. Furthermore
,The chance of theft may increase . people
will not value the importance of their rich cultural heritage
if they are allowed to enter museums
for free. For instance
, in ,Egypt museum fees are relatively high as the cost of maintenance is also
high.
However
, admission to museums
is paid . if will create funds for the upkeep of museums
. It also
provides financial assistance to the government . ,,
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apply
moreover
it will preserve cultural Add a comma
,moreover
heritage
in a secure way. People
will value the importance of their heritage
. for example
, In India museums
are restricted to paid visitors only as it helps in the upkeep of museums
and protects cultural heritage
.
In ,conclusion the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of keeping museums
with paid entry. Museums
are built to showcase the history of the culture of a particular region. It should be preserved and protected . That will only achieved
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