The pie charts compare ways of accesing the news in Canada and Australia .

The pie charts compare ways of accesing the news in Canada and Australia .
The two pie charts illustrate 5 different ways ( TV,  radio,  print , online and not specified) of entering the information in
Canada
and
Australia
.  Units are measured in
percentage
.  It is noticeable that   the proportion of accessing the news online is the main source for
Canada
while
online is  the best way in
Australia
.
However
,  radio and print have a small
percentage
in both countries. Accessing the news on TV (40%) was the main part in
Canada
and
also
online has the lower proportion, making up 36% ,
however
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these  indicators are opposite  in
Australia
.  Accessing information online has a considerably lower
percentage
, with 56 and following that TV (37) . In
Australia
, the
percentage
of people who were aware of information through print was 7 %  but
this
figure for
Canada
at half amount of
this
per cent. 
By contrast
,  radio and not specified had a small
percentage
,  7% and 3 % in
Canada
  respectively, and 2 per cent for both  ways in
Australia
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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