You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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Dear Mr Alfred, I am Annie Besant, a second-year graduation student. I frequently borrow

books

from your library. Recently I have borrowed 2

books

namely The Principles of Accounts by James Madrid and Money Rotates by Jefferson. I had taken the

books

7th

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of September 2023 and the due date is expected to be in 2 days

that is

15th of September 2023.Unfortunately,

due to

some unforeseen

circumstances

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I cannot

return

the

books

to you within the

return

period as I am travelling to visit my grandmother.Sadly, she's been hospitalized and undergoing a medical emergency. My Library card # is ANNB09 kindly I request you to re-issue the

books

under my name again so that

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am not charged for delay in returning the

books

However

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am expected to

return

by the 20th of September and I shall

return

the

books

to you at the earliest.I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Considering my situation I hope you can extend my due-date period. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Annie

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