You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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Dear Mr Alfred, I am Annie Besant, a second-year graduation student. I frequently borrow

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from your library. Recently I have borrowed 2

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namely The Principles of Accounts by James Madrid and Money Rotates by Jefferson. I had taken the

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of September 2023 and the due date is expected to be in 2 days

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15th of September 2023.Unfortunately,

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some unforeseen

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I cannot

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the

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to you within the

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period as I am travelling to visit my grandmother.Sadly, she's been hospitalized and undergoing a medical emergency. My Library card # is ANNB09 kindly I request you to re-issue the

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under my name again so that

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am not charged for delay in returning the

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am expected to

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by the 20th of September and I shall

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the

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to you at the earliest.I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Considering my situation I hope you can extend my due-date period. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Annie

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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