You are moving home. Please write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

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Dear My Kindness Neighbourhood, I am writing

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letter to you with my deep sadness for leaving you out of

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pleasant district.

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with, you have always helped me in many aspects.

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, I can not forget when you brought the food on my first day in

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beautiful neighbourhood when I was overwhelmed with getting my things in;

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, when you asked about my son when he was suffering from his illness.

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, there are many things and situations that I will miss there, like the extraordinary companionship we made or the sweet continuous visit of Mrs Amrs for asking if we needed any help!

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, the other great faces of our street.

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, we should meet soon, so I invite you to our new house for dinner on June 23. I have no will to accept any excuses;

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why I am waiting for all of you who will receive

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letter. I hope you all be here on the date mentioned, and I expect your response. Best Wishes, Mohammed Albayati

mohammedbayati98Tue Aug 22 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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