You are moving home. Please write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

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Dear My Kindness Neighbourhood, I am writing

this

letter to you with my deep sadness for leaving you out of

this

pleasant district.

To begin

with, you have always helped me in many aspects.

For instance

, I can not forget when you brought the food on my first day in

this

beautiful neighbourhood when I was overwhelmed with getting my things in;

moreover

, when you asked about my son when he was suffering from his illness.

Secondly

, there are many things and situations that I will miss there, like the extraordinary companionship we made or the sweet continuous visit of Mrs Amrs for asking if we needed any help!

Furthermore

, the other great faces of our street.

However

, we should meet soon, so I invite you to our new house for dinner on June 23. I have no will to accept any excuses;

that is

why I am waiting for all of you who will receive

this

letter. I hope you all be here on the date mentioned, and I expect your response. Best Wishes, Mohammed Albayati

Submitted by mohammedbayati98 on Tue Aug 22 2023

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