The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession
The bar chart illustrates the salary comparison between the different professions in the UK and a table depicting their average working
hours
per week
.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that underground driver accounts for the highest remuneration but has the minimum average work
hour per week
while
nurses receive the least pay.
The pay for the Underground Driver is unexpectedly higher than the rest of the professions while
, a newly hired one receives 50,000 pounds
and an increase of 1000 pounds
after 3 years of service, respectively. Furthermore
, a Nurse is the least paid worker from 18000 pounds
to 19000 pounds
. Followed by Police then
firefighters.
In more detail, surprisingly Underground Driver gets the least average working hour per week
, which is 36 hours
. In contrast
, firefighters work
an average of 55 hours
per week
. Moreover
, Police work
40 hours
while
Nurses work
38 hours
per week
, respectively.Submitted by Anneya
on
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