the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
This
provided line graph illustrates the count
of shops
that have been closed and opened from 2011 to 2018, in a period of 8 years. Overall
, it can be seen that there was a great variation in the number
of opening and closing shops
over the given time.
To begin
, in 2011, the count
of shops
that opened was above 8000, which was greater than the number
of closed ones by nearly 2000.Then
, in 2012, the number
of opened shops
experienced a sharp decline to one-half, so; it became about 4000. After that, there was a fluctuation between an increase and a decrease in the count
of opened shops
from 2012 to 2015, and then
; it remained constant from 2015 to 2016, at about 4000.
Regarding the number
of shop closures, in 2012, although
there was a slight reduction in their numbers, they were higher than the total of opened ones. However
, the number
of opened and closed shops
was approximately equal, in 2015, the count
of closed shops
dropped dramatically to less than 1000, but the count
of opened shops
stopped, at 4000, in 2016.Submitted by sm710129 on
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