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the chart below show the number of magazines sold

the chart below show the number of magazines sold
The provided bar chart compares data on how many people bought the magazine per person in five different countries for countries A,
B
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,
C
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, D, and
E
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 in three different separated terms which are 2003,2005, and 2007. As a general trend, it can be seen that magazine
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sold by people in
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B
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 was the highest number for all period
whereas
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E
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 was the lowest
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 in the same years. As the diagram suggests, In 2003, the number of
magazines
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 sold in
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B
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 made up almost half which was the highest
ratio
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 in the graph but in
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B
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 was nearly half.
Additionally
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, the
ratio
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 of
magazines
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 sold in
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C
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 doubled as that of
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 D
while
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Country
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E
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 had less than others. In 2005, sold
magazines
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 in Countries A and
B
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 had a very similar
ratio
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 but
country
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B
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 a little more than
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 A. The third section was
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C
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.
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, the three of them decreased
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according to
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in 2003.
On the other hand
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,
country
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 D and
country
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E
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 increased in another year but
country
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 D had more than
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E
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. In 2007,
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 A,
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B
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, and
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C
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 followed the same trend in the
last
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 year.
However
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, the number of
magazines
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 sold increased to over 20 people but the buying
magazines
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 in
country
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E
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 had as many as in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c, e, country, ratio, magazines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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