In many countries, children are overweight and un healthy.Some people think the government should be held accountable.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The overweight

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in

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children

is a huge

problem

in many countries.

This

healthy

problem

is associated with several reasons which could include

pour

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poor

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diet, less exercise, and medical complications. The

government

has an important participation in medical fields and they could contribute

generating

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to generating

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goods

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good

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expectations or bad expectations, depending

of

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on

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the spectator.At the of the day, they were selected by citizens. First of all, the

government

is the most important

roll

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role

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in the country,

for

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and for

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that

reason

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,reason

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they need to ensure

the

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healt

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health

for

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of

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people, not only

for

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adults,

also

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but also

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,

children

and

babys

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babies

. Obviously, kids will

has

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priority because normally they

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more medical complications. Many people think that the

government

is completely

resposible

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responsible

for

this

kind of social

problem

and politicians

has

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to invest more money in

healty

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health

healthy

programs in order to give them

good

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quality of life.

On the other hand

, there are certain

of

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people

which

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who

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think that

government

is not

responsable

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responsible

for

childen's

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children's

healthy. Parents must be aware of their

kids's

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kids'

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weight because

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parental control must be more

rigurous

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rigorous

in order to protect

children

's

healt

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health

either

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by either

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doing

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by doing

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outdoor activities or

keep

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keeping

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a good diet.

However

, kids under 14 years old

has

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have

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to be more protected by school and hospitals. To

sump

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sum

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up.

This

healty

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healthy

health

problem

and

overweight

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being overweight

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in

children

always be a difficult

problem

and

this

kind of

topics

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will trigger different points of view.

Nonetheless

,

pupulation

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population

has not to blame anyone, it is something that could be fixed with

healty

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healthy

health

programs more effective and making

and

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assesment

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assessments

, year after year.