The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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This
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line graph illustrates how many people visited the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017, for three different sectors;
visitors
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staying on cruise ships,
visitors
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staying on the
island
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, and total.
Overall
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, the
number
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of all types of
visitors
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showed an upward trend throughout the whole time frame.
To begin
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, the
number
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of total
visitors
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started with just 1
million
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at the beginning of the year. After that point, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased steadily, reaching around 2.7
million
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in 2019, and it depicted a significant rise of 3.5
million
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at the end
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of the year. Turning to the
number
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of
visitors
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who stayed on cruise ships and on the
island
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, they started with 0.3 and 0.7
million
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respectively.
While
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the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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increased to 1.5
million
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by 2013, it showed an unchanged from 2013 to 2015 and a fluctuation between 2015 and 2017.
On the other hand
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,
although
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the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on cruise ships fluctuated until 2012, it experienced an increase gradually and exceeded the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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, finishing at 2
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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