The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.
The line and bar graph
display
how the average temperature data and the revenue for the Change the verb form
displays
sales
of bathing suits
in New York for the early half of 2012.
Overall
, there was an increase in temperature as we reached the summer, with the selling of bathing suits
being higher during April, rather than in other months
.
On one hand, the temperatures for the first two months
of 2012, remained basically unchanged, they stood at roughly 30° Fahrenheit. After
this
, from February to June, they had a steady increase, reaching their peak in June, with roughly 65° Fahrenheit.
On the other hand
, sales
grew constantly for the first three months
, with January having 100.000 dollars
and March 150.000 dollars
. The next month, from this
moderate growth, the sales
started to climb steadily, with April reaching revenue of almost 300.000 dollars
, which was the peak in vending of bathing suits
among these months
. With summer approaching, the sales
of bathing suits
begin to drop rapidly, with May having solely 70.000 dollars
and June 10.00o dollars
, which is, instead
, the lowest point in the disposal.Submitted by cecconisofia2002 on
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