The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two
maps
illustrate an
island
before and after some tourist facilities and equipment are constructed.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the length of the
island
is more than 200 meters in both
maps
, and there are some palm trees near the east and
west
of both
maps
.
In addition
, there are plenty of changes after construction. Before construction, the
island
was without any residential areas, and there were some palm trees in the east and
west
of the
map
. It is noteworthy that the beach was located in the
west
of the
map
. After building some places, the
island
is developed.
Although
the palm trees remain in their locations, and the length of the
island
in both
maps
is the same, there are some accommodations in the centre and near the
west
of the
map
. Every two groups' accommodations are connected by footpaths, and one group
that is
situated on the
west
of the
map
is linked to the beach with a footpath.
Furthermore
, the beach is the best place for swimming in the
west
part of the
map
.
In addition
, a restaurant and a reception are built in the centre of the
map
and the reception is connected to the pier by vehicle tracks.
Moreover
, the south of the
map
, near the pier is used for sailing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words maps, island, west, map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 11 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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