The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two
maps
illustrate an island
before and after some tourist facilities and equipment are constructed.
Overall
, it is clear that
the length of the island
is more than 200 meters in both maps
, and there are some palm trees near the east and west
of both maps
. In addition
, there are plenty of changes after construction.
Before construction, the island
was without any residential areas, and there were some palm trees in the east and west
of the map
. It is noteworthy that the beach was located in the west
of the map
.
After building some places, the island
is developed. Although
the palm trees remain in their locations, and the length of the island
in both maps
is the same, there are some accommodations in the centre and near the west
of the map
. Every two groups' accommodations are connected by footpaths, and one group that is
situated on the west
of the map
is linked to the beach with a footpath. Furthermore
, the beach is the best place for swimming in the west
part of the map
. In addition
, a restaurant and a reception are built in the centre of the map
and the reception is connected to the pier by vehicle tracks. Moreover
, the south of the map
, near the pier is used for sailing.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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