Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree
Celebrations have been a human ritual since the
time
of dawn. Some people
do not bother celebrating because they think it does not bring materialistic benefits but in my opinion, celebrating has crucial impacts on mental health.
It is presumable that celebrating events is not an effective use of time
because in order to host a celebration event, the host would have to spend money, time
, and other materials. Despite using huge amounts of resources, celebrating does not bring any visible outcome, for instance
, property, clothes, et cetera. It completely changes the display of positive motives and builds grudges as well as
sentimental issues. By wasting time
on having parties and writing invitations, the host would leave being sad and desperate which is certainly not doing any good. So to avoid those terrible circumstances, some families choose not to celebrate.
Even though celebrations seem to be pointless, it has mental effects and the true idea of celebrating is making people
happy. "Happiness can not be bought by money", that is
the reason why the amount of time
and money that humans spend on the celebration is seemingly nothing compared to the result of it: happiness. Another point that adds up to this
argument is that celebrating is not strictly one individual activity but could involve groups of people
. This
is going to boost conversations and a celebration event can be a brilliant occasion for people
to build friendships and connections.
To conclude
, celebrating may not contain many materialistic advantages and is a waste of time
for some people
but to me, I think it is a great way to connect and get to know others better.Submitted by maainhdo on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite