The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the method by which
leather
goods are made from animal skin.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are 11 stages in the process, beginning with drying the animal skin and culminating in producing leather
goods.
To begin
with, animal skin is dried under the sun for a few days. At the next stage, this
leather
is delivered to the factory where it is washed in a vat containing water and lime. Following
this
, washed leather
is kept in another vat to be soaked in lime liquid for period
of time. After that, the Add an article
a period
leather
is flattened by the flattening machine to make the leather
flat, relaxed and clean. Subsequently
, it is put again in a the
other vat that contains Tanin (a mixture of water and Choose an article
the
vegetables
matter). After polishing the Change the noun form
vegetable
leather
with a specific brush, the polished leather
is transported by big truck to a manufactory. At the end
of the process, shoes, bags and balls are made from the processed leather
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