The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information concerning, the manufacturing of cheese.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there are 9 steps of the production, commencing with the preparation of raw milk and bacteria, and culminating in the shop.
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process
, the first and essential step is that fresh dairy and bacteria are in the acidification Use synonyms
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before sending to the solidification part. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, it is cut into many small pieces. Linking Words
Then
, the tiny pieces of cheese are heated and drained by increasing the temperature Linking Words
Following
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, the liquid cheese is added flavor by salt and transported to the shaping Linking Words
process
using a huge pressing machine. After the pressing stage, all products are fermented for approximately 2 months. The Use synonyms
last
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before exporting to the supermarket, they are packaged with special paper in rectangular shape and Use synonyms
then
sent to the convenience store for selling to customers.Linking Words
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