The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and 2017.

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The given bar chart represents the data for the number of patients admitted

according to

their age group at the emergency care in Northern Ireland in December 2016 and 2017. The largest share was held by the aged 75 and above, with the aged 5-15 holding the least.

Firstly

, for the age bracket 16-44, the figure stands at almost 30 and it

also

holds true for the people from 65-74; 25% for the zone of 45-64 and

lastly

, for the 5-15 it stood at 20%. For all these groups, the number for December 2017 was 1% higher as compared to that of 2016 for the same month. The highest numbers were for the population that was 75 and above, standing at nearly 62% and 65% for December 2016 and 2017. For the second largest contributor, under 5 were at 50% and 55% for the same previously described month and year. It can be clearly seen that both the infants and elderly require the highest usage of

such

services.

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emergency care departments
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age group
patient admissions
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