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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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As we move
further
 to the future, There will be a hot debate about health and its' important effect on our well-being.
While
 it is a widely held notion that a reduction is about to be seen in the level of health, I strongly disagree with
this
 idea and I will provide my supporting statements in the following paragraphs. The great expansion in technology has brought advancements in the medical sciences. In the past, individuals used to suffer from diseases that nowadays are easy to be cured.
For instance
, the majority of the people diagnosed with influenza passed away decades ago.
However
, with the invention of the
,
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vaccination a great immune response was built in the bodies who got vaccinated. The more progression and investigations in health and treatments, the more effective remedies and medicines will be.
Furthermore
, awareness will result in better lifestyles. It is commonly believed that more education will be provided by the next century. As the world is experiencing a new era of the appearance of virtual intelligence a great shift between traditional methods of teaching to more productive ways of transferring knowledge will occur. Being influenced by all the revolutions made ,there would be a great increase in awareness among the new generations leading to smarter choices for a more meaningful life. Ultimately, It is a fact that changes in modern life can cause well-being issues. The positive outcomes of these developments on our strength
such
 as surgeries , pharmacy ,and even physiotherapy equipment cannot be neglected.
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