It is generally believed that some people are born with certains talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed tha any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both the views and gie your own opinion.

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Across the globe, every
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has different capabilities, One segment of folk believes that there are some people who are born with some skills
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as music and sports
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other segments of folk think that it is learned by
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and by the support of any professional service. For me, it is a natural and
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to any human. On the one hand, it is true that some pupils are born with it and when they start to
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it is easy for them to learn the song's rhythm and tune very fast compared to others.
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, it is very easy for them to sing a song and
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it,
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, they have an interest in it to learn it
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public loves to learn it without taking its burden.
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, they will copy any best sports players or musicians in a very smart way as compared to other
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.
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, few
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are born with
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which makes them unique.
On the other hand
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,
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talents can be taught in
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institutions and at home by the parents. In the first , place kids learn it with the support of their parents and teacher
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in class and at home if they want it because
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skills can be learned without having a natural knack.
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as there are many talented people who are born with
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which everyone is not.
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,
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is a god-gifted talent that a
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gets. To reiterate, some proponents of that it is already available in the
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by birth
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others consider that it is learned by any human. In my opinion, it is
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a golden
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a
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gets from god which is not achieved with the help of
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or with the use of continuous learning to play football or basketball. In, addition a talented
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will achieve more success and fame as compared to another
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who has not achieved it without the cooperation of others. So, there are a lot of differences in both views and people's opinions.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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