The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The Bar graph illustrates information about the changes in the US households by annual income between 2007 and 2015,
data
presented Change preposition
with data
on
4-years intervals. Change preposition
in
Overall
, the highest income was over $100,000 or more group
in 2007, $25,000 ~ $49,999 group
in 2011 and $100,000 or more in 2015.
When it comes to $
75,000 ~ $ 99,999 Correct article usage
the $
group
pattern, the group
figure did not alomost
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almost
changed
to about 15 Change the verb form
change
millions
during Change to singular
million
in
the survey. And, the number ofChange preposition
apply
$
50,000 ~ $ 74,999 Correct article usage
the $
group
did not up and down to around 20 millions
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million
too
.
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apply
However
, the number of $100,000 or more group
had up and down to about 30 millions
, around 22 Change to singular
million
millions
, about 35 Change to singular
million
millions
and in 2007,2011,2015 Change to singular
million
repectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
Among between
2011 and 2015, they significantly increased by about 10 Change preposition
Between
millions
. Change to singular
million
Also
,less
than $ 25,000 Correct article usage
the less
group
and $
25,000 ~ $49,999 Correct article usage
the $
group
had the same pattern. that is
increased by around 10 millions
from 2007 to 2011 . And, Change to singular
million
that
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decreased by about 3 Unnecessary verb
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millions
between 2011 and 2015.Change to singular
million
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