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the average rainfall in March, Sep, and June in five cities in China

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The bar chart illustrates how much rain there was in
March
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,
June
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, and
September
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 in five cities
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 China.
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,
it is clear that
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Nanchang
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 and Shanghai had the most
amount
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 of
precipitation
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 over the
three
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 months,
while
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 Ruoqiang had the least among the five.
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, in terms of
rainfall
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,
June
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 and
September
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 recorded the
most
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amount
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 of
rainfall
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 in all cities apart from
Nanchang
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. In detail,
Nanchang
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 received the most
precipitation
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 over
three
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 months.
This
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 city experienced the highest
amount
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 of
rainfall
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 in
June
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, at almost 300
millimeters
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, which was almost double the
amount
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 of
rainfall
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 in
March
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, at 150
millimeters
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, and nearly
three
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 times of
rainfall
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 in
September
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, at less than 100
millimeters
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. Shanghai ranked as the second rainiest city, but unlike
Nanchang
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, the
amount
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 of
precipitation
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 was similar in
June
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 and
September
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, at around 150 millimiters each.
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 number was equal to the
rainfall
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 in Canchang’s
March
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.
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, Shanghai’s
March
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precipitation
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 was half of
Nanchang
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 in the same month. The other cities recorded lower levels of
rainfall
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. The
amount
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 of
precipitation
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 in
June
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, in Chengdu, stood at
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third place in all Junes, at 100
millimiters
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millimetres
, which was four times that of in
March
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 but around 40
milliters
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millimetres
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 lower than
September
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’s one. Beijing experienced much less
rainfall
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 than
Nanchang
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, Shanghai, and Chengdu. Its peak
rainfall
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 was in
June
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 at around 70
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followed by
September
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 at 50 and
March
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 at almost 10. The driest city was Ruoqiang, with the least levels of
precipitation
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 in all
three
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 months, around 1 to 2
milliliters
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each.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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