Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

This

is a topic

that is

being widely talked about whether

competition

or

cooperation

is useful to encourage

children

to be worthy adults. Personally, I hold that

cooperation

is more effective than

competition

in making

children

become useful when they grow up. I will explain my reasons in

this

essay. One argument is that

children

should be encouraged by

competition

. Because for individuals,

competition

can stimulate a person's potential and make him get better results in the game. It can

also

create pressure on others to improve and

break through

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themselves. A group

which

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has composition inside will be more competitive and often win more and better resources. But it

also

has disadvantages,

competition

means pressure, it will affect the

children

's state

,

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so that they cannot complete the work well. At the same time, it will destroy relationships. When faced with difficult problems, people will always think of

win

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winning

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rather than

help

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helping

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, which is

also

bad for

whole

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group. In order to become a useful person to

the

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society, the spirit of

cooperation

is essential, and it can solve some problems that are difficult to be solved by

competition

.

For example

,

cooperation

can reduce personal pressure, and in the process of training,

children

can

also

learn how to communicate with others and discuss problems, and improve

children

's social skills, which are essential parts

in

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the

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future work. Personally,

although

the cultivation of

competition

and

cooperation

awareness in the child's growth process is necessary,

but

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most of the work is difficult to rely on individual strength to complete, so

cooperation

is relatively more important.