The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line graph illustrates how much and what type of fast food did
Australian teenagers have taken in 15 years from 1975 to 2000.
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It is clear that
,
teenagers who ate pizza and Remove the comma
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hamburgers
increased highly between these years, while
the number of consumption did not change from 1995 to 2000 in both categories. Consumers of hamburgers
increased sharply in 1985, whereas
it continued its upward trend during the next years. The difference between the amount of hamburgers
and pizzas took
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taken
day
in 2000 was around 15.
However
, the count of times ate fish
and chips in a day
, had a downward trend from 1975 to 1985 and they showed partial growth until 1995,
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it
started to decrease. In 1997 the amount of time Correct pronoun usage
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hamburgers
fish
and chip
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chips
day
were the same at 85. ,Moreover
in 1994 the same amount of Add a comma
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fish
and chips and pizza were shown in a day
.
Overall
, Interest in pizza and hamburgers
had
increased from the beginning but from 1995 it did not change. Unnecessary verb
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Nevertheless
, most teenagers had the least interest in fish
and chips in modern more than in the past.Submitted by skn on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hamburgers, day, fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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