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Modern technology has more negative effects on our lives than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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One of the most pressing issues of our contemporary era is technological
inventions
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. Some
people
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 are of the view that recent technologies are detrimental to our society,
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, other believe that the technology which has been produced lately are beneficial for mankind. I clearly agree with the perspective that modern technological advantages are a blessing for our living though I support that there is a variety of scope for exploitation. Generally speaking, a lot of
people
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 support the view that recent technological
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 negatively affect our way of living. One of the major reasons for
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 way of thinking may be previous unwanted experiences
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 as being victims of hacking or privacy issues.
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, they become biased. It can not be denied that modern technologies
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 as face recognition, and data mining have some critics like they collect personal information and use it as a weapon to control
people
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's movements.
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, recent experimentation with Artificial intelligence can bring harmful consequences in the upcoming days like a significant amount of
people
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 who do clerical jobs can lose their work.
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, New
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 and technological advancements like robotics
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 biomedical gadgets that can measure body activities can improve our lifestyle and contribute to the betterment of aged
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.
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, technologies
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 digital communication change our world in a positive way.
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 who live in rural areas can access knowledge and information which were enormously difficult in the previous eras. In conclusion, I like to mention that technology could be a dangerous weapon if
people
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 use it for personal gain.
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 the contribution of recent technological
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 is solving numerous problems in
people
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's daily life.
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