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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart displays some information about what Anthropology students from a particular university did after graduation.
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, some data about the salaries of these graduates after five years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 most Anthropologists were hired in full-time jobs after finishing their undergraduate degree courses.
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, those who worked in a government section accounted for the highest income in comparison with their peers.
However
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, those who were working in private companies were earning less money. With regard to the destination of Anthropology students, nearly half of them were going to work full-time,
while
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 only 15% of them had part-time jobs.
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, 8% of these students were going to continue their studies at full-time postgraduate levels, and 12 per cent were jobless.
Although
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 5% of graduates were involved in part-time jobs
as well as
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 postgraduate studies, no information about roughly 7% is provided. Concerning their salaries, 50% of those civil servants were earning more than 100
thousand
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dollars
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, whilst only 5% of them were gaining money from 25
thousand
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dollars
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 to 49,999
dollars
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. The same is almost true for freelancers.
On the other hand
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, even though the percentage of those employees in private incorporations who earned money ranged from 25
thousand
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dollars
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 to 50
thousand
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dollars
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 was higher than the other two types, with 10%, only 30% of them could earn more than 100,000
dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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