Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the extinction of some
vegetations
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and animals, is the main environmental issue of our time,
while
others believe that there are
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more vital problems that are associated with
this
subject. I personally assume that the latter view is more acceptable, and there are more hazardous
issues
than the mentioned ones. On the one hand, some individuals think that losing special animals or plants has a dreadful effect on nature. Primarily, losing vegetation diversity can affect the air quality, because
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are not enough plants anymore to produce oxygen and refresh the air;
hence
humans would face pollution in residential areas.
Additionally
, the extinction of some species, especially some large predators, can have negative consequences on a habitat’s ecosystem; To illustrate, by not being enough cats in a city to hunt the mice, the number of mice would increase in an unpredictable way, which can even cause several diseases.
On the other hand
, I assume that much more serious
issues
are now threatening the environment.
Initially
,
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human-based disasters
as a result
of industrial explorations, especially during the 20th century, caused several catastrophes and changed the whole environment’s situation.
For example
, after the
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disaster, the whole ecosystem of the affected area, and even a huge part of Europe’s water sources were
consequently
contaminated
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and damaged the natural resources in many ways.
Furthermore
, improper utilization of natural resources in
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of commercial purposes
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caused a lot of
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that endangered the global
environments
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environment
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. To exemplify, the logging process in terms of building new accommodations for
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growing population, led to the deforestation catastrophe, which is the main reason
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global warming.
Thus
, these are more important environmental
issues
that we currently struggle with. In conclusion,
although
losing special animals and plants can
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our nature, I believe that humans’ industrial activities and irreversible errors are causing more environmental
issues
,
such
as contamination, deforestation, and global warming.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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