Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinio

Some people believe that

children

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need a

sense

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of

competition

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,

while

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others think that

cooperation

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is more useful than

competition

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for

children

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to become adults. I prefer

cooperation

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rather than

competition

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in raising

children

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.

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essay will introduce both sides and my reasons for

cooperation

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. On the one hand,

children

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do need a

sense

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of

competition

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.

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,

competition

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can increase

children

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’s abilities, including life, study and so on. By competing with others,

children

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could discover their true capacities which they are really good at and exercise more about capacities which they are not good at.

Secondly

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,

children

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can get more confidence through

competition

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. For those

children

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who win the

competition

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, they may feel a

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of acquisition and achievement, and become confident.

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,

children

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also

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need a

sense

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of

cooperation

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. To start with,

cooperation

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can teach

children

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the importance of being friendly. By finishing a project or a work with many other

children

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,

children

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can realize how to get along well with other

children

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.

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,

cooperation

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can develop a

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of responsibility for

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. By distributing different tasks,

children

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will understand that each person in the group needs to complete their own task perfectly, which can improve their responsibility.

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but not least,

cooperation

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is good for

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’s mental health. Because there is no success or loss,

children

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may not envy others, which can develop their mental health. In conclusion,

competition

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does have several advantages in increasing

children

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’s abilities and making them more confident.

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, I still believe that

cooperation

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is more significant for

children

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becoming adults because it can teach

children

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to be friendly, develop a

sense

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of responsibility and be good for their mental health.