At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situtation outweigh the disadvantages?

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innovation outweigh its disadvantages There are several drawbacks of the

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of some

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including a relatively large

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. A common reason is that the

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is mostly young

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, If these

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have too many young

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. The same means the knowledge is low. We are compared with the

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. Another negative aspect can be that young

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sometimes think so quickly, and don't think so deeply.

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, in spite of these negative effects, the

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can bring about important benefits. One obvious advantage is that we have a big source of employees.

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, a job requires all staff to be young and strong.

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iscompany so easy to choose employees. Another positive effect is that the economy will be developed. Why I said that

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the main reason is

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country has more young

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, young

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can bring about important benefits. In conclusion,

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the

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includes a relatively large

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, compared with the

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have some disadvantages, it is obvious that some

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. My view is that the

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of some

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includes a relatively large

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of young

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, compared with the

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of older

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can bring about more benefits than harm.