Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree what is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include example form your own experience.

It is often argued that human life is becoming positive because of online
media
and
news
, even if it doesn’t appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with
this
opinion and I will discuss the reasons why I disagree. There are some convincing reasons that the effects of
news
and
media
are not positive. First of all, By increasing of supply of the Internet, people’s accessibility of
media
is increased. So everyone can write their thought on the internet, and It causes a lot of fake
news
and wrong
information
. And the development in the wrong way of official
media
also
affected it. Many reporters had to compete with each other for more provocative articles, and it resulted in plenty of fake
news
and
information
and it made much trouble.
For example
, my grandmother is
also
a victim of fake
news
, she saw the
news
that the wall will be started on social
media
. So she was very afraid of that
news
for a
while
. It happens not only to my grandmother but
also
to many other public.
Secondly
, someone said it is convenient and good to get a great deal of
information
on the Internet.
However
, there a plausible grounds so I do not think like that. We can get some stress to distinguish true
information
and fake one. In the sea of
information
, we must accept
information
very carefully and always be suspicious which is real.
For instance
, I have an experience that had a headache trying to apprehend truths in many
information
. Not only in my case, we are able to be confused because of excessive
information
in the
media
. In conclusion,
media
and
news
have merits that provide us with a lot of
information
quickly, but there are
also
drawbacks as much as merits. We should apprehend what is fact and use
media
more rationally.
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