The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
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percentage of
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of residents between Yemen and Italy in three groups in 2000 and
projection
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for 2050. In Yemen, the
population
in the youngest age
group
, 0-14
years
old, accounted for over 50% of the total
population
of the country in the year 2000, and
this
proportion is expected to decrease by the year 2050.
Whereas
, in Italy, the number of people in the age
group
above 60
years
old is projected to nearly double by the year 2050. The young
population
group
in Yemen, aged 0-14
years
old is projected to decrease from 50.1% to 37% over the span of 50
years
,
while
the
middle-age
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population
group
, 15-59
years
old, is expected to increase from 46.3% to 57.3%. Meanwhile, the elderly
population
group
above 60
years
old is anticipated to experience a slight increase and maintain the lowest proportion on the chart throughout the 50-year period. The oldest
population
group
in Italy, aged above 60
years
old, is trending towards doubling in the span of 50
years
, increasing from 24.1% to 42.3%,
while
the middle-age
population
group
, 15-59
years
old, is projected to decrease from 61.6% to 46.2%. Meanwhile, the youngest age
group
, aged 0-14
years
old, is expected to experience a slight decline from 14.3% to 11.5%, and it will hold the lowest proportion in Italy's
population
chart
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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