some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together .Agree or disagree to this statement and give your opinion.

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is

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art form, it

perform

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unity in diversity.Some

people

believe

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form of art

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a

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capacity to organise

people

without any discrimination of lifestyle and period. I totally

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with

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statement.

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about

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the reasons

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this

agreement and

also

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. There are myriad things to be shared in its

favoure

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favourite

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of

music

bring

people

who have different

background

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such

as languages and nations. First and foremost

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folks

have

ability

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to understand what the

creater

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creator

mean

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in a particular song and

same

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emotion of that song.

Moreover

, it helps to reduce the gap between generation to generation.

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rush

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and fully booked .

People

are ready to enjoy all types of

music

without any discrimination. Moving towards

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significant factor is that

music

create

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a

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same emotional vibe among

public

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the public

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even if they are children or old age

people

.

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,

while

playing

music

we automatically

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to

the

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another world created by that

music

.

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,we can

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seen

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majority are

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voluntarily

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fully

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experience

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with present

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movement

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that

are

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making

a

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imaginary world.

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to overcome our negative emotions.So researchers say that

music

play

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a significant role in mental

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therapy

for

overcome

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the state of depression.

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Coimbatore

submit

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a report

is

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that

Music

is a medicine for mental disorders

moreover

it become more

efective

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effective

than tablets.

To sum up

, I personally agree with

this

statement . There are tremendous reasons why

music

is

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gooD

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good

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method of bringing

floks

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folks

flocks

from different cultures and ages together.