The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the level of
education
of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and settle in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008. The group with a higher
education
rate was 17 per
cent
in 2002, being lower than 20 per
cent
in 2006 and higher than 2008 in 9 per
cent
.
On the contrary
, the group with primary and lower
education
rate was 18 per
cent
in 2002, which is lower than 19 per
cent
in 2006 and 32 per
cent
in 2008.
Overall
, the result shows that those people with secondary
education
are most eager to immigrate at 65, 61 and 59 per
cent
while
those with higher
education
show the least interest in immigrating with 17, 20,and 9 per
cent
in 2002, 2006 and 2008 respectively.
Although
the group of people with primary and lower
education
levels did not show much eagerness to immigrate between 2002 and 2006 with 18 and 19 per
cent
respectively it experienced an upward trend in 2008 with 32 per
cent
.
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  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
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