The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of
visitors
to a particular Caribbean
island
over a period of seven years (2010 to 2017).
Overall
, the total
number
of
tourists
increased between 2010 and 2017, and the
figure
for
tourists
who stayed on
cruise
ships
showed a similar trend. Staying on the
island
was a more popular choice before the second half of 2015, and
then
was exceeded by the
cruise
ship option. From 2010 to 2013, the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
rose from 0.75
million
to about 1.5
million
,
while
the
figure
for
visitors
who stayed on
cruise
ships
fluctuated between 0.25
million
and 0.5
million
. The
figure
for
visitors
staying on the
island
remained stable between 2013 and 2017 with the exception of 2011 (1.25
million
).
By contrast
, the
number
of
tourists
staying on
cruise
ships
had consistently risen to 2
million
by 2017. It should be noticed that
although
the
figure
for
visitors
staying on the
island
remained higher than that of on
cruise
ships
, the gap between them continuously narrowed, and was overtaken in the second half of 2015, which means that staying on
cruise
ships
had become the most popular option for
tourists
when visiting Caribbean
island
.
Although
the
figure
for
visitors
staying on the
island
and on
cruise
ships
showed different trends, the total
number
of
tourists
coming to the Caribbean
island
had grown steadily to 3.5 times as many as the
number
in 2010 (1
million
).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, tourists, figure, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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