Some people say that advertising extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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issue of advertising influence is a topic of ongoing debate. Some communities argue that advertising gains their trust and attracts them to purchase goods.
while
others believe that advertising is quite casual and is not useful for a long time. In
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I will present arguments for both perspectives and explain why I support the first viewpoint. There are two key reasons why people argue that advertising is not suitable a way to attract audiences. The first reason is that nowadays
commercial
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have no innovative ideas and all companies advertise in similar ways
for instance
in all
advertisements
music play a crucial role, and it is boring for a set public. The second reason is the same actors in opposition
advertisements
. What's more, advertising actors  do not have perfect performances in their roles
for example
you watch an actor who advertises a brand of chocolate after that he takes place in a toothpaste advertisement.
While
these two are opposite to each other and chocolate is harmful to teeth with these processes people's trust in
advertisements
has definitely been decreased.
However
, I agree with
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notion that
advertisements
can attract society to buy things. With developments in technology and social
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companies can use many platforms for advertising
instead
of TV
such
as Instagram shows or web advertising.
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the street posters converted to the best way of advertising with clarified and marvelous texts.
On the other
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commercial is the pillar of trade so in developed
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companies give gifts as a motivation for buying,
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instance in 2020 Charlie
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(a clothes company) gave a book to every customer. In
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although
it's set of public argue that
advertisements
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extinct I believe that advertising with modern technology social medias and additional free things including gifts as the first and foremost innovative opinion can attract people to purchase goods.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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