Some people say that advertising extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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issue of advertising influence is a topic of ongoing debate. Some communities argue that advertising gains their trust and attracts them to purchase goods.

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others believe that advertising is quite casual and is not useful for a long time. In

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I will present arguments for both perspectives and explain why I support the first viewpoint. There are two key reasons why people argue that advertising is not suitable a way to attract audiences. The first reason is that nowadays

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have no innovative ideas and all companies advertise in similar ways

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music play a crucial role, and it is boring for a set public. The second reason is the same actors in opposition

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. What's more, advertising actors do not have perfect performances in their roles

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you watch an actor who advertises a brand of chocolate after that he takes place in a toothpaste advertisement.

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these two are opposite to each other and chocolate is harmful to teeth with these processes people's trust in

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has definitely been decreased.

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notion that

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can attract society to buy things. With developments in technology and social

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companies can use many platforms for advertising

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of TV

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as Instagram shows or web advertising.

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the street posters converted to the best way of advertising with clarified and marvelous texts.

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commercial is the pillar of trade so in developed

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companies give gifts as a motivation for buying,

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instance in 2020 Charlie

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(a clothes company) gave a book to every customer. In

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extinct I believe that advertising with modern technology social medias and additional free things including gifts as the first and foremost innovative opinion can attract people to purchase goods.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

312 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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