The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.

The maps show the changes that happened to an island called Paradise.
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The given maps illustrate how Paradice
Island
has changed after undergoing a major development.
Overall
, Paradise
Island
witnessed a significant change with many infrastructure facilities. The old pier of the
island
has been modified by facilitating access for Cruise ships. The scientific Research Station was replaced with a mega hotel complex and a swimming pool. An open restaurant was built in the middle of the
island
by removing the coconut trees and an access road was built to connect it to the hotel complex. A new cafe was constructed next to the natural spring.
Moreover
, to enhance the accessibility within the
island
, a cycle path has been introduced by well connecting all the amenities within the
island
. Another interesting change to the
island
is the implementation of a scenic lookout on the upper edge of the
island
.
Further
, an area was allocated and delineated for swimming on the beach which is located next to the pier.
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